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hastantyo

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PostSubject: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySat 18 Jul - 17:52

Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch. that is 2005 Toyota Alphard.

here is the pics:
here, here, here, and here.

and here is my problem. i'm stuck to make a perfect face right there. Sad could you give the suggestion? and i'm still bad to make shape of that car, like front bumper, grill, etc...

thanks! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySat 18 Jul - 21:31

hey looks nice

i've pointed out some few modeling problems but coult you change you upload the images at imagecheck or ubload.de or imagebam .

i can't see them clearly

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySat 18 Jul - 23:05

Hey, your model looks nice. You have good idea of poly-flow. Is this your first model ever?
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hastantyo wrote:
Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch.


lol!

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySun 19 Jul - 16:08

Salim wrote:
hey looks nice

i've pointed out some few modeling problems but coult you change you upload the images at imagecheck or ubload.de or imagebam .

i can't see them clearly
hm, okay. i'll try... Wink so, here a little update. i have make the wheels.
2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) D2e561425183942005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 9402d4425183982005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 0be5bd425184052005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 9a937442518410
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is the face of the wheels good? sorry for that bad face on the glass... -_-"

and i have make new scratch project again. familiar as that Toyota Alphard, but this is the 2004 one. here the pics:
2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) A7fbe9425184242005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 6775c042518419
i tried to fix my self to make a new shape and perfect face on that body. please, the suggestion. Wink

Silent1Unknown wrote:
VladyF wrote:
hastantyo wrote:
Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch.


lol!
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LOL Silent! Laughing Laughing haha!
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySun 19 Jul - 19:19

looks nice man !!

here is what i pointed out :

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the part you found as a problem is a bit straight so try to do like i drawed for you Smile .

ah ! Btw, i see you are using a verry primitive technic of modeling .

when you have a straight part there is no need for many rows only one can do it let me explain to you :

useless rows :

2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 34b3ff42531693

needed one :

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useless rows :

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needed ones :

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in picture of useless rows you can see that many Zmod modelers do it in that way while they can do it in the second way . and that's due to 2 things

1st reason : some think that a lot of poly mean a verry good work, and that's wrong .

2nd reason : many people doesn't know how to do it .

so that's why i made this small tutorial to help you Smile to fix this kind of modeling probems .

hope it will help you , and that many of you who used to do those modeling issue will not do it in their futur game projets Smile .

Best Regards;
Salim Ljabli

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySun 19 Jul - 21:31

TDU mod? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptyMon 20 Jul - 16:16

WOW! Shocked thanks a lot Salim! thanks a lot! its very very help me whic still in trainning, hehe Razz okay, i'll fix that. Very Happy

@franko; its Midtown Madness 2 mod
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySat 25 Jul - 22:48

too much poly for such a car and wireframe are not right)))
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptyWed 28 Oct - 15:04

Hi Salim! i removed the previous version of this project, and redo it again. i do a hard work, and try to follow you tutorial, not use a primitive technic again. hehe...

so, here is the pics what i have done so far:

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2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 41200c539043762005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 5f937c539043792005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 78d58c539043842005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) B7234753904388
2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 6f6886539043942005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) 9ff984539043982005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) A1391153904402

please the comment, which part is still not correct? how about the normals? advice me. thanks a lot!
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySat 31 Oct - 0:14

oh ! nice work

looks 3X better than the old one Smile .

there still a lot to fix but it looks good taugh .

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker) EmptySat 31 Oct - 11:07

salim, can you show me the specified part is need to fix please?
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