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PostSubject: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 18 Jul - 17:52

Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch. that is 2005 Toyota Alphard.

here is the pics:
here, here, here, and here.

and here is my problem. i'm stuck to make a perfect face right there. Sad could you give the suggestion? and i'm still bad to make shape of that car, like front bumper, grill, etc...

thanks! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 18 Jul - 21:31

hey looks nice

i've pointed out some few modeling problems but coult you change you upload the images at imagecheck or ubload.de or imagebam .

i can't see them clearly

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 18 Jul - 23:05

Hey, your model looks nice. You have good idea of poly-flow. Is this your first model ever?
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 18 Jul - 23:21

hastantyo wrote:
Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch.


lol!

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sun 19 Jul - 2:04

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sun 19 Jul - 16:08

Salim wrote:
hey looks nice

i've pointed out some few modeling problems but coult you change you upload the images at imagecheck or ubload.de or imagebam .

i can't see them clearly
hm, okay. i'll try... Wink so, here a little update. i have make the wheels.


is the face of the wheels good? sorry for that bad face on the glass... -_-"

and i have make new scratch project again. familiar as that Toyota Alphard, but this is the 2004 one. here the pics:

i tried to fix my self to make a new shape and perfect face on that body. please, the suggestion. Wink

Silent1Unknown wrote:
VladyF wrote:
hastantyo wrote:
Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch.


lol!
LOL Silent! Laughing Laughing haha!
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sun 19 Jul - 19:19

looks nice man !!

here is what i pointed out :



the part you found as a problem is a bit straight so try to do like i drawed for you Smile .

ah ! Btw, i see you are using a verry primitive technic of modeling .

when you have a straight part there is no need for many rows only one can do it let me explain to you :

useless rows :



needed one :



useless rows :



needed ones :




in picture of useless rows you can see that many Zmod modelers do it in that way while they can do it in the second way . and that's due to 2 things

1st reason : some think that a lot of poly mean a verry good work, and that's wrong .

2nd reason : many people doesn't know how to do it .

so that's why i made this small tutorial to help you Smile to fix this kind of modeling probems .

hope it will help you , and that many of you who used to do those modeling issue will not do it in their futur game projets Smile .

Best Regards;
Salim Ljabli

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sun 19 Jul - 21:31

TDU mod? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Mon 20 Jul - 16:16

WOW! Shocked thanks a lot Salim! thanks a lot! its very very help me whic still in trainning, hehe Razz okay, i'll fix that. Very Happy

@franko; its Midtown Madness 2 mod
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 25 Jul - 22:48

too much poly for such a car and wireframe are not right)))
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Wed 28 Oct - 15:04

Hi Salim! i removed the previous version of this project, and redo it again. i do a hard work, and try to follow you tutorial, not use a primitive technic again. hehe...

so, here is the pics what i have done so far:





please the comment, which part is still not correct? how about the normals? advice me. thanks a lot!
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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 31 Oct - 0:14

oh ! nice work

looks 3X better than the old one Smile .

there still a lot to fix but it looks good taugh .

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PostSubject: Re: 2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)   Sat 31 Oct - 11:07

salim, can you show me the specified part is need to fix please?
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