2005 Toyota Alphard (begineer scratch maker)

Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch. that is 2005 Toyota Alphard.

here is the pics:
here, here, here, and here.

and here is my problem. i'm stuck to make a perfect face right there. could you give the suggestion? and i'm still bad to make shape of that car, like front bumper, grill, etc...

thanks!

hey looks nice

i've pointed out some few modeling problems but coult you change you upload the images at imagecheck or ubload.de or imagebam .

i can't see them clearly

Hey, your model looks nice. You have good idea of poly-flow. Is this your first model ever?

Salim wrote:

hey looks nice

i've pointed out some few modeling problems but coult you change you upload the images at imagecheck or ubload.de or imagebam .

i can't see them clearly

hm, okay. i'll try... so, here a little update. i have make the wheels.


is the face of the wheels good? sorry for that bad face on the glass... -_-"

and i have make new scratch project again. familiar as that Toyota Alphard, but this is the 2004 one. here the pics:

i tried to fix my self to make a new shape and perfect face on that body. please, the suggestion.

Silent1Unknown wrote:

VladyF wrote:

hastantyo wrote:

Hi all! this is the second car i have made from scratch.

LOL Silent! haha!

looks nice man !!

here is what i pointed out :



the part you found as a problem is a bit straight so try to do like i drawed for you .

ah ! Btw, i see you are using a verry primitive technic of modeling .

when you have a straight part there is no need for many rows only one can do it let me explain to you :

useless rows :



needed one :



useless rows :



needed ones :




in picture of useless rows you can see that many Zmod modelers do it in that way while they can do it in the second way . and that's due to 2 things

1st reason : some think that a lot of poly mean a verry good work, and that's wrong .

2nd reason : many people doesn't know how to do it .

so that's why i made this small tutorial to help you to fix this kind of modeling probems .

hope it will help you , and that many of you who used to do those modeling issue will not do it in their futur game projets .

Best Regards;
Salim Ljabli

TDU mod?

WOW! thanks a lot Salim! thanks a lot! its very very help me whic still in trainning, hehe okay, i'll fix that.

@franko; its Midtown Madness 2 mod

too much poly for such a car and wireframe are not right)))

Hi Salim! i removed the previous version of this project, and redo it again. i do a hard work, and try to follow you tutorial, not use a primitive technic again. hehe...

so, here is the pics what i have done so far:





please the comment, which part is still not correct? how about the normals? advice me. thanks a lot!

oh ! nice work

looks 3X better than the old one .

there still a lot to fix but it looks good taugh .

salim, can you show me the specified part is need to fix please?